Today, for Life List Club Friday, I welcome fellow Life Lister, Gary Gauthier, for the second guest post of the week! Gary has a great blog called Literary Snippets, where he posts snippets (get it?) of classics, as well as pictures that relate to the snippet. I love it because it's like an art and literature lesson in one!
If you miss me (I hope!), after you finish reading Gary's awesome post, please stop over at Jess Witkins' Happiness Project, where I am sharing some thoughts on Positivity.
Without any further ado, heeeere's Gary!
How to Structure the Plot of
A Novel by Gary Gauthier
A New Look at the Narrative Arc
If you are serious about writing fiction, your stories can’t
ramble. They need structure. I am going
to suggest to you a simple system that can be used to create a memorable work of
fiction. It has the added benefit that it can help you easily sketch an entire plot
with a visual representation.
Nature, in her infinite wisdom and grace, gave us
the arc.
What Is the Narrative Arc?
The narrative arc is a metaphor used to describe a story’s trajectory. A plot
begins with rising action that sets up a challenge; the challenge creates
tension that reaches a climax; finally, the tension is released and the trajectory
heads downward to a point of rest.
A smooth trajectory like
the arc of a rainbow does less than full justice to the rising and falling
action in the plot of a novel. Our system goes one step further and uses the
arc to show rising and falling action as the plot progresses.
Narrative Structure: A
Simple System That Works
1. Reduce your plot to two central events.
2. Place the first central event about 25% into the story.
3. Place the second central event, the climax, approximately 25% from the end
of the story.
4. Unify the plot with an overarching theme.
The Foundation of Your
Plot is the two central events you selected. The first
is called a catalyst (or inciting event) and the second is the climax. The two
events are related and involve the protagonist or the hero.
Here are three
examples of plot foundations.
I: Boy likes girl. The girl, overcome
by a display of chivalry and bravery, falls in love.
II: Victim suffers great harm. She exacts revenge.
III: Protagonist enters an arranged
(or bad) marriage. She is transformed and leaves.
Use an overarching theme to unify the
entire plot. For the examples above, the themes can be: love conquers all,
an eye for an eye, and the ugly duckling is transformed into a beautiful swan.
A Visual Representation of Our System
The two red pillars represent the catalyst and
the climax. They also help to define the narrative arc.
From Point A to Point
B - Your job as a novelist is to create a meaningful and memorable ride for
the reader from point A to point B. Your subject matter and the genre determine
whether the ride is heartwarming, inspirational, stormy, disturbing, thrilling
or horrific. The big caveat is, if your story is not interesting, the reader
can put the book down at any time and never finish.
A Play in Three Acts
- The two red pillars in the figure divide the plot into three sections. Most
plays and movies use this system. Most best-selling novels and literary
classics follow this format. You can label the blue vertical supports and use
each to represent a chapter or a scene. As an example, you can use the
following convention: a, b, c; 1a, 1b, 1c; 2a, 2b, 2c.
Pace the Dramatic
Tension. It’s not an accident that the narrative arc peaks at the inciting
point and at the climax. It’s an intentional, creative act by the writer.
Tell the Story
Deliberately. Start the story with action and circumstances that lead the reader to the catalyst. The
reader should be vested in the story (sold) by the time he arrives at the
catalyst. Begin the centerpiece of the plot (approximately one-half the
narrative) after the inciting event (think: “after commercial break”) and end
it with the climax. Close the story
by driving the point home (reinforcing the theme) and resolving the aftermath
of the climax.
The Unifying Theme
Plays a Crucial Role. The structure of your story holds the action together in a
self-sustaining and interconnected plot that moves in one direction. A winding excursion leading nowhere is a
waste of writing talent. If you follow the template laid out above, the characters will be woven into the
theme in support of the plot. If all
the action and the characters do not come together as a unified whole, your readers will be disappointed and will feel
like their trust was misplaced.
Purpose and Structure
are Distinct Animals. The purpose of a bridge is to provide for safe travel
from one point to the other. A traveler
doesn’t care (and is only vaguely aware) that the bridge’s structure is
a system of support designed to bear
weight across a span. So it goes for the reader and your plot.
Stay True to Your
Purpose. Let’s face it—most readers of fiction are looking for entertainment, an escape. They don’t care how you structure your story, but without a sturdy plot supported by a strong foundation, you reduce the chances of achieving your purpose.
If you end up writing a best-seller, what most readers will notice is that you wrote a great story.
Did you recently read a novel whose plot fits into the structure described? What’s your personal experience with the narrative arc?
(Images are sourced by courtesy from Wikimedia.)
Gary Gauthier is working on his first novel, a crime thriller set in New Orleans just before Hurricane Katrina's landfall. His blog,
Literary Snippets, gives him an opportunity to express and share his appreciation for art and literature. He occasionally posts articles as well. Some of his favorite writers are Thomas Hardy, Charles Dickens, George Eliot, Nathaniel Hawthorne and Edgar Allan Poe. But this changes from time to time. Stay tuned! Follow him on
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